作者: EKIN (say..) 看板: SCUMOTOR
標題: Re: hello everyone
時間: Thu Jul 29 14:57:01 2004
※ 引述《xavier (大家一起來 喔A~! )》之銘言：
> i am in berkely now
> i saw lots of motorcycles here
> and i have a good time here,but this is too big here.
小夫英語時間:
這句文法錯誤如下
1.前後文時態矛盾
2.this is too big here 句中缺少主詞 而且this is和文意不符
> it's so tired to walk all the day
> i miss my FZ2,hope to meet her asap
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